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Pouring a Slab Near Cane River

Don Hynes

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May 8, 2013

Before first light the men arrive

in their battered pickups, dented

from the in and out of heavy tools.

Jack Benjamin helps J.C. lift the power trowel

and strike the blades from yesterday’s pour.

The first sweat of the day is glistening,

the air still night cool when in the distance

the sound of gears, a concrete truck hitting speed

then slowing into the sandy gravel cut.

Once the first truck arrives there’s no stopping

the tsunami of mud,

the men adding as much water as I’ll allow

to get the weight to flow into the spaces

between long runs of rebar and steel mesh,

working with come alongs and wood handled shovels,

the chute roaring back and forth like an angry elephant

as the cylinder turns, the diesel motor strains

and the mass of concrete flops around in its womb

before dropping out in a surge.

The younger men move the cement,

jitterbugging rocks, pushing the dead weight

while J.C. and Benjamin drag the screed,

getting something near level on the first pass

before the mass begins to set.

Benjamin starts working the edges with his trowel,

flattening around the anchor bolts,

truck after truck rolling down the long country road

dumping its store then turning back

until the hole is filled and the slab is poured.

The harder work is done as the sun rises

and starts lifting moisture from the slab,

the concrete turning color as they lift the big trowel

onto the hardening edge, J.C. pulling the chord

until the two stroke turns,

throwing out a choke of black smoke

and the blades rotate, flinging an arc of slop -

so J.C. turns it off. It’ll take a bit more setting time

so he and the men go back to their edge troweling,

sweat pouring into their rubber gloves,

their boots thick with goo, their arms flecked with concrete

washed off with the truck’s hose along with the chutes,

the sun slowly rising, the long day just begun.

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